my 1st draft and critiques

 this is my 1st draft  of my advert after I published this draft I asked a group of people to watch my documentary and give me feed back which would help me improve my advert. 

 

Forms response chart. Question title: what did you think of my documentary ?. Number of responses: 4 responses.

Forms response chart. Question title: what did you think of the length of the documentary ?. Number of responses: 4 responses.



this is my feedback that I received of peers. I will take this feedback on board and apply this to my next draft.

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